Johann Wolfgang Von Goethe says "First build a proper goal. That proper goal will make it easy, almost automatic, to build a proper you." We should build our goals to achieve what we want to accomplish in our lives. Even the most trivial subjects, such as English, can become a big asset to an individual. But what can we expect to accomplish in Englcom? There are several goals we wish to accomplish in Englcom.
One goal is to improve our writing skills. Everyone knows how to speak english but sometimes when they start writing the grammar, spelling, punctuations and other things to consider in writing are not properly observed. Not all good speakers are good writers, because even if they have good grammar when speaking, they might not know how to use punctuations or let alone spell. Another is to express oneself better in terms of writing. Especially in blogging we should know how to use punctuations, how to construct good sentences and how to use fitting words so that the reader could understand our message better. Lastly, the most important goal is to pass the subject. You can't graduate without passing a subject and this goal applies to all subjects.
English is a widely used form of language and most people know it. What we learn in englcom is not just english but how to use it and understand it. When getting a job there might be times when we are required to write about ourselves, so this is were your writing skills come to play. If you write a good paper and the reader understood it you will get accepted. But other than writing you should also know how to understand what you're reading especially if your job is filled with researches. If you were a scientist, you need to understand what you're researching in order to be able to come up with a precise conclusion. Also you have to evaluate sources well so that your information is correct.
There are many ways we can achieve these goals. You can have extra lessons before or after classes; it's good to have extra knowledge and to be prepared for the class. Another way is to always practice writing. The phrase: "Practice makes perfect." is not a theory but truth. You can do this by blogging or even writing in your diary. Lastly, we have to pass all requirements and this also applies to any subject.
English may seem like an easy subject but it is very important, not only now but for our future. We can use it to find work and we can use it for our work. But before we can succeed, we have to set goals and take action. These are our goals and we will be sure to achieve them.
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ReplyDeleteI like your goals, but it would have been better if you used I's instead of we's since you are talking about your goals. Good essay though.
ReplyDeleteI like your goals and how you showed just how essential English is in today's society--- it made your goals a bit more powerful in my opinion. Although, I agree with Sharkbait. You should've used I instead of We :) Good Luck with the next assignments!
ReplyDeleteGood essay!:D I like your quote at the very beginning. Same thing about the "I's"that's it! RESPECT!
ReplyDeleteI like your essay but considering your title says "My", you could have changed your voice to first person. (ex. In sentence, "You can't graduate without passing a subject and this goal applies to all subjects.") Rather than using "You", you can use "I" or "We".
ReplyDeleteBut aside from that, your essay was very organized and well-written. :)
Your have a good attention grabber (hook technique) and I like it. The sequence of ideas is logical. However, you have to be consistent in your use of point of view because you mixed "We" and "you" in your essay..
ReplyDeleteFinnick is right that you have to use "I" since it is referring to your goals.